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In the midst of my slumber, I shift & I stir.
For something faint beckons me, of that I am sure,
My eyes flutter open as I lay in the dark,
Prodded suddenly awake by some unseen spark.

Slowly I become aware of my restriction,
My place of rest surrounds me with such constriction.
Outside I know it is less confining...
With the howling moon and the shining wind combining.


It seems as if much time has passed whilst here I've laid,
And I wonder if the world outside the same has stayed.
I come to reason and I know that departed is the light,
& the world that awaits is dressed in the mantle of night.

Here there is little room for movement,
To stretch and stand would be an improvement.
The soft cage that imprisons me allows only for so much,
What I need is to get out and feel the moonlight's touch.


My bowels twist and writhe, maddening agony,
Fierce hunger boils within and strains to escape me.
It's rage becoming an unbearable pounding,
The rush and insanity is completely astounding!

In the battle between it and myself, it is stronger.
I realize, beaten, I cannot take it any longer,
And with all I can gather & collect,
I do all I can to ensure my jailing is wrecked.


I tear away at this solitary prison,
Like a raging beast that has just arisen,
I tear away at what has kept me under,
My kicking and growling making loud thunder.

I claw my way out to greet the stars and night sky,
The rush of adrenaline makes me feel I could fly.
I lurch out of the place of my resting torment,
Standing tall I am clearly no longer dormant.

Finally the calm night embraces my skin,
Woe to my resting-place, the fun will now begin.
My eyes dart from place to place, wild and manic,
And the trees shiver and wave in what seems like panic.


For they know what is next...


I thirst, and just like so many nights before,
I go forth on my eerie march, a tidal bore,
I tread through the gates in shadowy form,
Awakened again, to take the world by storm.

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:iconthedarkcloak:
Hmmm...

Any guesses as to what my madness driven collection of words is attempting to convey?

Think twice.

Extra special thanks to mi for bareing with me over a couple of days working on this, and helping me lots in refining the rythm and word arrangements in key places!!!

Couldn't do it without ya Grey!!! & If I somehow would've... it woulda been half assed. :D
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~voodoomaggie Sep 1, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
IT'S SPAC-FUCKING-TACULAR! I love it!
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Mood: Joy ~thedarkcloak Sep 1, 2011  Professional General Artist
kee heee!!!
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Must say, i like the way it flows, the rhythm... it's dark and it's eerie. just as i like it. And reminds me of vampires, rather....

there's nuthing better than a tall dark vampire. :D although, this one aint even remotely aproachable. tough luck :P

wonderful piece of writting, and a job well executed. :clapping:
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:iconvidz:
beautiful poem, and great imagery,rhyming scheme is perfect everything matches up great and i love the little story this poem wove as well, very much reminds me of vampires ;)
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~thedarkcloak Dec 5, 2004  Professional General Artist
ooooh thanks!!!

I'm so glad SOME people still check out my written works.

I tend to go in and out of thinking if I should just delete them from my gallery, but if just one person reads em now and then and it does something for them... it's worth leaving them up.

Heh, funny that. There's more to it... some people have mentioned werewolf, vampire, zombie, hell mummy too I think... :)

Ponder it over some more. :D
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your welcome and of course they do is a good poem :)
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~GuyaricanKitten Nov 1, 2004  Student Digital Artist
It sounds like you have a whole werewolf thing... though I'm not really found of the beats, I do like how you put the poem along... I could relate in someway, which is what a poet would want, no? you did a very lovely job on this. I really like it alot.
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~thedarkcloak Nov 13, 2004  Professional General Artist
interesting! You are the second person to say that. Others have said zombie, vampire, even midnight snack. Heh.
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ohhh and remember to turn on the lights... if you're gonna make shakes, unless you want dumplings.
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~thedarkcloak Oct 28, 2004  Professional General Artist
LMAO oh man!!!
my shake making fluke will haunt me endlessly!
D'0h!!!
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